Maureen at the Nook came up with the idea of doing a rolling post. Each person who has volunteered to participate gets to add 3-4 sentences as their contribution. The participants are:

Poseidons Muse
and our newest convert:   P fuzzbox

The curtains were drawn against the chill of an early winters evening. The only sound to be heard was a sigh as she poured over one of her interminable lists, this being for the coming weekends dinner party.

She was concerned how she would keep them apart after the recent unpleasantness.
It was unthinkable she not invite them both, but in doing the right thing by them, had created a problem for herself…..

Poseidon’s Muse
Drawing a soothing draught of red wine from her glass, she looked up from her list and stared across the room. A distant memory, like the transient flash of ‘his’ handsome smile, spurned her inner turmoil. She had developed feelings for Steven during her initial tenure at the University. Their first encounter seemed almost cliche. A fateful walk across an autumn campus, a stack of books falling upon golden autumn leaves, polite words spoken, lucid eyes meeting hungrily. Butterflies.

What had begun as an innocent friendship between colleagues (for Amy would later be introduced to Steven as a contemporary) later spurned into a brief, but torrid, romantic affair. When the couple resuscitated themselves from their grey moral vortex, they realised that they would make better friends than bed-fellows and had decided to remain in each other’s lives. Now, Amy had the task of playing chancellor and counsellor to her friend, as he struggled for a sense of equilibrium in his failing marriage. Once again, she sensed the butterflies.

Writer Chick
Amy sealed both invitations, one for Steven and one for Margo, his estranged wife, and adhered a lovely tiffany art stamp to each. “I hope to God, they aren’t still arguing over custody of the dog or the chimp – helluva a dinner topic that will make.” She put the invitations aside for the post office run she would do in the morning and pondered the menu for the party. “Now what dish would both please Steven and compliment his lovely golden curls by candlelight – of course, curry!”

Amy sat on the couch contemplating the difficult intricacies of the seating arrangement when the phone rang.


“Ms. Neidelson, thank God you’re home. This is Dr. Shotzendach. I hope I’m not catching you at a bad time.”

“No, doctor. I’m just sitting . . . Is everything okay?”

“Well, I do believe we’ve found the source of your equilibrium problem and I’m glad you’re sitting down. You’re two months pregnant. And here’s the best part: You’re having twins! Congratulations! Ms. Neidelson?”

“Uh . . . I don’t understand doctor . . . I mean, I understand but . . . how do you . . .”

“Your lab results and the CAT scan images told us all we needed to know. Ms. Neidelson? Ms. Neidelson, are you still there?!”

Amy began to laugh hysterically. A bit too hysterically . . .

The phone slipped from her spasming hand and crashed against the glass of wine. Her laughter morphed to sobs as she sat mesmerized by the bits of broken glass and the spread of the crimson stain against the polished hard wood floor. Bitterly she asked herself, how could she have come to this pass. She had been so careful all her life and yet one afternoon of unbridled passion had sent her whole world reeling.

For as long as she could remember, Amy had vowed not to conceive. She had worked her entire life to not only conceal but to expunge the story of her childhood. She had spent her early years raised in a traveling circus but not the romanticized life. Her father was not the Lion Tamer and her mother was not the Beautiful Lady on the Flying Trapeze. No that was only in her dreams. Her father was Wee Willy Winky, The Smallest Man in Northern America, and her mother was Woolly Wanda, The Bearded Woman. Tears ran down Amys’ face as she wondered if this life would be exposed if she was to give birth to two small bearded goat girls.

She berated herself but she knew that it could have been no different. She had not the power or the will to avoid succumbing to the charms of the Parcel Delivery Man. She had been in a high state of anticipation over the delivery of her lavender shower curtains when Dan rang her doorbell. One look at his glittering smile, the first glance at the sunlight shimmering off his baseball cap, and her heart and her loins melted.

But what now? How could she put on a brave face for the dinner party this weekend with her entire life in turmoil.


After wiping away warm tears, Amy smoothed out invisible wrinkles from her dress and stood to look out the window. Her sniffles and tears subsided as mascara had run down her cheeks, staining her fair skin. As she watched from the foyer’s window, she noticed a few children playing in the snowdrifts across the street. This saddened the woman as she knew that she would never have normal looking children that didn’t need a daily shave at the age of four, but at least they’d stay warm during the chilly winter season.

Amy’s thoughts went to the Parcel Delivery Man and his wooly, sweater-like back hair. What a lovely sight, she remembers. It reminded her of her dear, late Mother. A heavy sigh escaped her as she shook her head, cursing herself at the thought of the dinner party, and the details that still needed to be finalized. “Woman, you must pull yourself together, if only for the weekend!”

She pondered the guest list and thought of him, Steven.

As she went to the closest for the broom and dustpan she remembered the first night she spent in Steven’s arms…dinner and dancing till dawn at the officer’s club. He had looked so stunning in his military regalia. At their initial meeting as colleagues he had invited her to attend his official retirement from the Marine Corps to enjoy his teaching position full time. The butterflies increased but the evening had followed with the most intense love making that Amy had ever enjoyed and had since to be repeated. Even the afternoon spent with Dan was no match. If only she would have been as careful with her birth-control methods then.

She swept up the shattered wine glass and reflected on the fact that she had been drinking while her unborn children inhabit her womb. What type of life was she bringing them in to? Were her bearded babies lives to be hampered with an addiction to alcohol like hers had been? The circus life had been hard…sometimes the only thing her father would bring home from the store was alcohol to drown away the lonely life the family lead.

Poseiden’s Muse
With her dinner list complete, and the turmoil of the evening settling in her mind, Amy retired to bed for the evening.  Her dreams were fitful and she tossed and turned violently in her sleep.  She awoke the next morning with a vivid recollection of those troubling nocturnal thoughts.  “Bearded children, military uniforms and broken glass” she murmured to herself as the first rays of dawn struck her face.  “I need a strong cup of coffee,” she grumbled to herself as she rose out of bed and headed for the kitchen.  As Amy stood waiting for the coffee to percolate, an agitated knocking sound rattled her awake.  Thinking it was a dream, Amy ignored the sound and began pouring herself a strong elixir.  “Bang, Bang, Bang!” this time the noise was penetrating, and very real.  Amy nearly jumped out of her skin.  Who would be calling at this hour?” she grimaced to herself angrily, stomping as she made her way to the front entrance.  “I’m coming…” she yelled at the closed door, “please give me a second.”  As Amy opened the door, she was surprised to find herself face to face with a furry humanoid face.   EEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkk!” Amy shrieked and slammed the door suddenly. 
“What in the world?” she exclaimed to herself as she pressed her back against the door. 

Her thoughts were brought back to last night’s dreams; the beards, the bearded baby faces.  Her heart was pounding furiously.  Again, another set of three knocks, and the sound of a human voice.  Upon recognising the voice, Amy opened the door cautiously.  This time, she was greeted by Steven.  “Uhm, hello Steven!” blustered Amy as she opened the door, “I’m sorry for my bizarre reaction, but I thought I actually saw a furry child on the front step when I first opened the door, and he/she startled the heck out of me!” 

“Actually Amy, I know that it is rather early and the party doesn’t start until 6 pm, but I needed to ask you a favour,” chided Steven.  His eyes were sparkling and his wry smile told Amy that he was either having nostalgic thoughts, or he was truly up to something devious.

“Sure Steven, what is it?” Amy queried, noticing the leash in his left hand, then added sardonically, “Don’t tell me you have a freaky bearded baby attached to that leash.”

Steven looked down and from behind his legs the leash slackened as a tiny chimpanzee padded her way to the threshold of her door.  The chimpanzee looked up at Amy with deep, dark eyes.  She had the cutest face.  A bearded baby face.  “It seems as though Margo and I are having a custody battle over Lola” lamented Steven, “and Margo is now threatening for sole custody of our dear little chimpanzee girl, so I was wondering if you would be able to help us out?” 

With that question, Amy just stood there, scratching her head, as the chimpanzee reached across her furry backside in search of a “smelly preparation”, should her new “stepmom” fail to receive her with open and loving arms….

And here I go folks:

“What do you mean, ‘help you out’, Steven?”

“Well, could Lola stay with you for a few days?  You see, the judge decreed that Lola must stay with a neutral third party while he deliberates his decision regarding Lola’s custody.  And since you’re a friend to both of us, you seemed like the logical choice.” 

While Steven was explaining himself, Amy stood transfixed by the wee little monkey face before her.  Such a sweet, hairy little creature!  Lola’s facial features so resembled Amy’s dear, departed mother it was uncanny.  Why, it was almost like looking into the past.   

“Well?” Steven said.  “What do you think?”

Amy thrust out her arms to take Lola.  “Oh Steven, I’d love to” she said.  Then she stopped abruptly, arms in mid-air.  “But the dinner party!  I have hours and hours of food preparation ahead of me.  Who will look after Lola?”

“Oh, I think you’ll find Lola quite helpful in the kitchen” Steven said with a glint in his eye.  “Yes, veeeery helpful.”   “By the way, are you still preparing Indian food for tonight?”

“Curry” Amy replied, once again holding her arms out to take Lola.  She cradled the little primate in her arms, her body swaying back and forth rhythmically. 

“Did you hear that, Lola?  Curry!”  Steven grinned at Lola, who in turn exposed a mouth full of teeth at Steven in typical money-grin fashion and nodded her head up and down rapidly while screeching monkey sounds back at Steven.    “Lola gets rather excited about cooking.” Steven explained.

“Okay, I guess it will work out.” Amy said.   Oh this monkey reminded her so much of her dear mother!!  Right down to the hand clapping and teeth exposure!

“Thanks” said Steven.  “You’re a real lifesaver.”  He gazed into Amy’s eyes meaningfully, and took a step closer.  His blonde curls glinted radiently in the sunlight, momentarily blinding Amy.   “I hope I can thank you properly later” he said softly. 

“Oh” said Amy, trying to blink the spots out of her eye.  “Oh yes, Steven.”  She suddenly felt overheated and dizzy, then noticed that Lola had wrapped herself around Amy like a baby possum clinging to its mother.

“Here’s Lola’s diaper bag and some assorted toys.  And at two o’clock she likes to listen to her CD of organ-grinder music.  Helps her relax for her nap.   She’s a great help in the kitchen; just give her things to mix up.  She’s a whiz at mixing, aren’t you Lola-Ebola?” Steven chucked Lola under the chin, then turned to go.    Amy and Lola waved goodbye to Steven until his car turned the corner.

“OK, my little Lola-Ebola,” Amy crooned, using Steven’s special term of endearment.  “Let’s go cook!”  Dropping Lola’s bag in the foyer, Amy took Lola by the hand and they walked into the kitchen.  As Amy gathered ingredients from the refrigerator and cabinets, she didn’t notice Lola scurry out of the kitchen and back to the foyer, where she began rummaging through her bag.  Removing the small packet of tumeric from her bag, Lola slipped it into her diaper and returned to the kitchen, her favorite organ grinder tune playing happily in her head…

And now I’m passing this literary masterpiece off to my main woman, Reg. 


9 Responses to “Splendid!”

  1. 1 poseidonsmuse October 22, 2007 at 3:22 pm

    LMAO!!! OMG, you are absolutely BRILLIANT! Lola-Ebola!!??? Organ Grinder Music!!!!???

    I’m nearly in tears from laughing over here….[bowing down to OB…]

    ….just brilliant….


    Aw shucks…just doin’ my part, ya know!

  2. 2 anonymum October 23, 2007 at 2:25 am

    ROTFLMFAO….i can’t WAIT to see what happens next!!
    i’m with pm….absolute genius! well done!

    Thanks cutie! I got started and couldn’t stop.

  3. 3 purefnevyl October 23, 2007 at 11:38 am

    Now I have to find a cd of organ grinder tunes. Great addition.

    It rocks the house too.

  4. 4 cowgalutah October 23, 2007 at 11:48 am

    I’m so glad to see that I’m not the only interested party in the organ grinder music. Do they sell that on amazon?
    Great stuff…

    Haha! They do! Check it out.

  5. 5 writerchick October 23, 2007 at 2:40 pm

    Oh my, Lola-Ebola has put tumeric in her pants – that’s some spicey monkey. This was hysterical. Great.

    Wasn’t I evil to do that? It’s my nature.

  6. 6 poseidonsmuse October 23, 2007 at 5:40 pm

    Spicy turmeric pants…I love it!

    Still can’t stop laughing at your addition OB…[snort].

    Oh…I’ve tagged you too Babe…Thought you might like to share some ABC’s about yourself! 😉


    You know how much I love to talk about myself! I’ll be there soon!

  7. 7 joebec October 24, 2007 at 1:49 pm

    i really hope you like the spin i put on your Lola! this story has the capability to take place on Mars at this point LOL 😉

    Oh yeah, you did a great job, Reg!

  8. 8 Laurie Anne October 24, 2007 at 7:26 pm

    THis was fantastic! Next time, please please include me!!

    Oh definitely. I’ve already put in a request to do this again – but not for a few weeks at least!

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